What We Have Done To Butterflies Comments

good poem to regret the loss of scenic beauty of the nature

good poem to regret the loss of scenic beauty of the nature

none dare interfere with the natural scheme of coming into being...

Dear Shirine Sheikhi, I have expected sadness just judging by the title, but actually it is Weltschmerz (world-emracing woe) . You've managed to rise to heights of world's best philosophers in your highly poetic work. Congratulations! 10+

Nice metaphor...great imagery!

A new twist to the way we look at butterflies....enjoyed the poem very well done, regards uavaniceday

Well thought and structured ideas.

Nicely worded with some beautiful ideas.

A sad and thoughtful poem well expressed. I find the rating system pretty meaningless, but I think well of this poem.

A really lovely poem, thank you 10 Lynda xx

What we have done to butterflies, a painful question and the answer is even more painful. Last stanza uplifts the whole poem. It reminds me one of my poems ' Weep hole '. Good work, Shirin.