Saturday, July 28, 2012

What We Have Comments

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In our hearts
we have love
in our souls
we have eternity
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Dave Alan Walker
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Heather Wilkins 20 October 2013

a good short write, we are just human with a mind set

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R.j. Wynn 23 June 2013

Wishes do come true sometimes, hopefully for the better/

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Valerie Dohren 28 July 2012

Brilliant Dave, the human condition in a few words.

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Heather Wilson 28 July 2012

Oh, that hit me, short and sharp, but how so very, very true.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 28 July 2012

The last line is different, though we, human, have to mature and go off. an interesting poem!

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Dave Alan Walker

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