What Wave Does Not Tell The Shore Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

What Wave Does Not Tell The Shore

Rating: 5.0


Wave does not tell the shore anything.

She knows pretty well
That she will be annihilated
In his lustful embrace;
Yet she flows to the shore
With open arms
And trembling lips
Her watery nakedness
Her transparent emotions.

In his arms she forgets
the momentousness
Of the union.
About the next wave
Coming after her.
No longer she is aware of
The sea
That is the cause of her existence
And the winds
That kindled her passion.

Now
Now she departs
With twinkling tearful eyes,
Her lovely fingers
Leaves his chest unwillingly,
Shore searches for her
In the sand
As her smile* disappears
Over the waters,
He has to be contented
With the orphans of the sea**
She has left under his care.

Notes:
*Her Smile: The effervescence appearing on the suraface of the sea when the wave retreats
**Orphans of the Sea: The fish, crabs, shell-fish etc. left on the shore when the wave retreats.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 01 October 2020

Wow! .. Such deeply moving words each line, with heart intertwined! .. 5 Stars! .. Just occasionally breeze through. Keep writing the deep beauty that you do! ..

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 June 2018

what lovely imagery smile and merge with the lover and the next wave brings along a fruit of golden crabs and fish easiest way of free transportation o poet lovely imagery read my best poetry moms smiles and mothers day today try and translate these inn yo ur language many have done so

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 June 2018

Thank you for the lovely comment. And sure, I will do...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 May 2018

It is so beautiful poem on love and seperation on a metaphorical base having thrilling expression. The inscription of love among wave and shore is touching and romantic. It is very wonderful that you have made them alive for which they could express their love impressively through your pen.10

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 May 2018

Thank you sir, for reading this poem and appreciating my effort. Obliged.

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Rini Shibu 07 May 2018

wonderful metaphor used, sea and shore and their endless love

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 May 2018

Hi Rini, Thank you for you time reading the poem and offering lovely comment. Obliged.

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Wow! Unni, this is such a romantic poem. What imagery! Never imagined waves of the shore to be so full of 'Sringara Rasa! I feel, this is one of your best poems. Happy to be the first to give you a full vote of 100 for this poem. :)

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 May 2018

Hi Geeta, Thank you for the wonderful comments on this little poem, of course, on love... Yes, the wave and the shore have such an elegant romantic relationship. When Romance is in the air, the Rasa is definitely Srinagaram. Geeta, your words make my day! And a special thanks for the lovely 100.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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