Monday, September 24, 2012

What Was Worth? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Each and every background of my songs
Never assault, but you may be absorbed
With a puzzle game you may blame
I came alone to your sweet home
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Eindaray Kyaw
COMMENTS
Khine Lay 02 October 2012

Really good.I think you write your real feeling.Sorry, I just kidding.Do you always try to take his photo?

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Payal Parande 26 September 2012

phenomenal indeed, a splendid write full of emotion and a heartfelt piece thank you for sharing love payal

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Aung Si 26 September 2012

Wonderful! Not only this, but also warmly kiss Did it curse me to lose my own? Should I try again to love a male? Theses verses are straight to my heart.Well done! ! ! !

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Asif Andalib 26 September 2012

Excellent write my dear poet. Keep on poeting

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 26 September 2012

there is no specific formula for all these schemes and everyone has their own trial, tribulations and joy! so it is your wish!

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 25 September 2012

Here we have a good question, What was worth? we would have different ideas about the above question. but you have done a good work. lots of things perhaps...who knows? well done.

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Sunny Rose 25 September 2012

I feel how u feel ur relationship with ur bf/lover misleading somehow through ur wonderful poem.....

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Vikram Basu 25 September 2012

A beautiful poem indeed... thank you so much 4 sharing... :)

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So Close 24 September 2012

hii...its pretty different and also i like it very much... Every morning, I sent you a coffee Not only this, but also a warmly kiss Every moment, it's only you who influence A particular ring tone from my phone Did it curse me to lose my own? superb lines... gud work dear keep writing... »so close«

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