Wednesday, January 7, 2015

What Was Once One Thing Comments

Rating: 4.3

My soul picked up momentum
As I accumulated more and more debris
Everything I came in contact with
Was sucked into the black hole
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Brian Kilpatrick
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Roseann Shawiak 02 July 2015

You definitely have a way with words, your style fits them nicely in verses filled with meaning. Another really great poem filled with raw emotion and stark reality of truth. Love your poetry! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Nishi Kumari 08 January 2015

beautifully written...keep up the great work...

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