Wednesday, January 20, 2021

What Together We Do Comments

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Most of us.
Including you.
Me. They and them.
Regardless of ethnicity.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 January 2021

Wow, great muse here, i like the metaphoric line, and the God stanza so meaningful. Kudos! ! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled ' mini earthquake experiences'

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 20 January 2021

Hi, S. zaynab, I appreciate your comments. I will read your poem. Is it entitled 'Mini Earthquakes'? Again, I thank you.

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