Wednesday, October 14, 2009

What To Do 4 Love Comments

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When she walks away from you mad= [ Follow her ]
When she stare's at your lips= [ Kiss her ]
When she pushes you or hit's you=[ Grab her and don't let go ]
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jackie Quero
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Jackie Quero 08 August 2012

hi i like ur poem is rely nice for some one to do for miiiiiiiiiiiii

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Abby Wall 14 October 2009

only a girl could write this...guys just don't gettit. loving your work...keep it up Abby x

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Nicole Gehrman 14 October 2009

very nice i like this. its true in so many ways. its simple. I no what each and everyone of these feelings feel like but not once did he ever do his part. it was all about him that my feelings didnt matter. your better at writing poems than you think all you gotta do is put pen on paper and talk with your heart not your mind. let the words flow outta you. :) you should read a few of mine and tell me what you think.

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