Wednesday, November 5, 2008

What To Do? ? Comments

Rating: 5.0

What to do,
When your heart sinks and no one is there for you.
When pain is more and words are few.
When you wanna reach, but where? You don't know.
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pallvi sharma
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Rinzu Susan Rajan 11 November 2008

well written with a questionong attitude... A 10 +++

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Priya Arora 05 November 2008

Marvellous Poem, well written in rhythmic manner. You deserve 10 for this beautiful peace. If you can spare some time then do read my poetry and give your valuable comments on that. Reards n Thanks Priyaa Arora

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love it love it very nicely written thanks for sharing please do read some of my poems

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