Tuesday, August 30, 2022

What This World Will Look Like? Comments

Rating: 5.0

When moonlight will find a place under the sun,
When the winds will flow like waves,
When blood will have a spectrum,
What this world will look like?
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M. Asim Nehal
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Rebecca Navarre 15 October 2022

Magnificent images! .. With such deep beauty! .. Beyond #'S! ..+++++++++++++++++++++

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Anjandev Roy 01 September 2022

Marvelous piece.......thank u, dear friend...

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Indira Renganathan 01 September 2022

'O' Lord wake me up in that world Where the differences get dissolved Enmity gets evaporated into the air And love surrounds the life.'...very hopeful write

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 September 2022

Excellent message on climate change Bravo!

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Sandra Feldman 31 August 2022

Plus a Galaxy of Stars.

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Sandra Feldman 31 August 2022

Good Poems are made up, Of beautiful dreams not yet conceived, Keep on dreaming, Poet, That's where true fiction gains esteem. This work a true magnificent dream of a Poem!

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Uche Nwanze 31 August 2022

A masterpiece

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Nabakishore Dash 31 August 2022

Effulgent concluding stanza dear Dr.Nehal.

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Bharati Nayak 31 August 2022

Wow--A great poem! So beautiful dream with a prayer to God to make this earth a paradise!

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Richard Wlodarski 31 August 2022

Spectacular vivid imagery! Every line in the poem is absolutely magnificent. Top marks and more, Dr Nehal!

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 31 August 2022

if the love surrounded everything lovingly then there is no suffering except peaceful life.

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Martinez Salotori 30 August 2022

O' Lord wake me up in that world Where the differences get dissolved Enmity gets evaporated into the air And love surrounds the life.

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