Saturday, September 27, 2008

.......What This Minute Is Worth......... Comments

Rating: 3.3

All these choices,
All these notions.
All feasible,
All veritable solutions;
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Waqas Naeem 18 December 2008

Although I'm a hard determinist and don't think we actually have choices but nevertheless you have carved an immaculate statue personifying the importance of time out of the crude stone (of time) ! I especially like the way you work with the unpredictable future and the sweetness of hope in the last lines. wonderful, cheers...

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Kesav Easwaran 11 October 2008

Be dead for self and live for many...very insightful poem this...what we do right now...right at this moment in life has definitely a bearing on generations to emerge...a well thought out write, Wardha 10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 08 October 2008

This is a very good composition. excellent subject, very well penned..........10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 02 October 2008

An excellent poem. Love it.

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for a presence tailgaing, racing and finally throttling past eternity 'absence' a fuel worth burning- excellent mon ami

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Shy Powder 27 September 2008

i dont really know what it was all about, but i like enjoyed the words that you used :)

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