Look at me
See the butterflies fly away
See the world in my eyes
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A very good one....! just loved it....! tanx for encouraging me....
Good Composition...Look into my eyes See your life go by...Beautiful lines.
Hey there :) you messaged me to read this poem of yours.. good write, I look forward to reading some more of yours.
Beautifully written, thanks for the share as you have touched my soul once more with your words....Blessing
thanks my man, your poem is impressing, very easy to the mind to say.yes man! there are destroying our world.
Well done dear Dave, you are right we are destroying our world.If really it can talk it will cry and shout more than you say.Thanks for sharing.
Wow. an intense, profound concept. An amazing job here. A real eye opener Thank you.
Ok i will give 2 comments 1.Joking comment: If world can talk, it must be scary and nobody will dare to do anything bad...why? let say if someone pollute/dig the mines, sacrifice the river with greediness, earth will grumble...'Oh no people, you will bury in my soil' hahahaha so nbody will make disturb it... 2.Serious and true comment: Special crafted poem, full of awareness...I totally agree with you, how come we become so selfish to sacrifice and kill the beauty of nature like that...Slowly we destroy our own life right? Dave, this is great poem to open and talk this..We use natural resources air, light and space free but we waste it with terrible pollution...bad for earth and return to human: (...good poem..raise my 10+ for this theme :) _Unwritten SOul
Humanity destroys. We must learn to create. Lovely poetry, I love this.
Ouch. in a nice way but still- ouch. and i liked it :)