Sunday, October 9, 2011

What The World Would Say If It Could Talk Comments

Rating: 4.7

Look at me
See the butterflies fly away
See the world in my eyes
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Dave Alan Walker
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Deci Hernandez 05 June 2012

Ouch. in a nice way but still- ouch. and i liked it :)

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Roshma Rodrigues 03 February 2012

A very good one....! just loved it....! tanx for encouraging me....

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Claudia Krizay 22 January 2012

A great poem, Dave, one I can relate to!

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Rizvana Parveen 18 January 2012

Good Composition...Look into my eyes See your life go by...Beautiful lines.

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Charles Darkly 13 January 2012

Fantastic poem. Rated 10.

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Gordon Tseng 09 November 2011

Good to read loudly.

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Richard McClellan 29 October 2011

Good work here, nice write! I enjoyed reading it!

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John Salome 26 October 2011

Hey there :) you messaged me to read this poem of yours.. good write, I look forward to reading some more of yours.

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(De Va) 26 October 2011

Beautifully written, thanks for the share as you have touched my soul once more with your words....Blessing

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Clifford Hall 20 October 2011

Thankyou: a startling perspective

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Akwa Chris 18 October 2011

thanks my man, your poem is impressing, very easy to the mind to say.yes man! there are destroying our world.

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Hosny Soliman 12 October 2011

Well done dear Dave, you are right we are destroying our world.If really it can talk it will cry and shout more than you say.Thanks for sharing.

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Poetic Heir 12 October 2011

Wow. an intense, profound concept. An amazing job here. A real eye opener Thank you.

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Jacqui Broad 11 October 2011

Thunderous writing. I could hear the lion roaring inside...

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Eric Cockrell 10 October 2011

amen, sadly, amen! you nailed it, my friend!

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Jose Tadeu Agneli Filippini 10 October 2011

it did talk! ! ! great! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 10 October 2011

Ok i will give 2 comments 1.Joking comment: If world can talk, it must be scary and nobody will dare to do anything bad...why? let say if someone pollute/dig the mines, sacrifice the river with greediness, earth will grumble...'Oh no people, you will bury in my soil' hahahaha so nbody will make disturb it... 2.Serious and true comment: Special crafted poem, full of awareness...I totally agree with you, how come we become so selfish to sacrifice and kill the beauty of nature like that...Slowly we destroy our own life right? Dave, this is great poem to open and talk this..We use natural resources air, light and space free but we waste it with terrible pollution...bad for earth and return to human: (...good poem..raise my 10+ for this theme :) _Unwritten SOul

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Stefanie Fontker 09 October 2011

Humanity destroys. We must learn to create. Lovely poetry, I love this.

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Crimson Love 09 October 2011

Extraordinary poem, simply brilliant, very well written! :)

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