Friday, June 2, 2017

What The Earth Told The Sun Ii Comments

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It takes
eight long minutes
for your light
to reach my lips
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Arta Krasniqi
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Daniel Brick 02 June 2017

Your first Earth/Sun poem is so positive with Earth delighted to orbit/dance around the Sun. but this one seems to be clouded by barely concealed jealousy. Earth is possessive of Sun's kisses and sees potentials recipients as intruders to be eclipses. Or am I reading too much into the scenario? ?

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