What Success Is? Comments

Tried much to illustrate success with rhyme. Nice your project to demonstrate the subject. I request you to read my poem about success...I AM SUCCESSFUL MAN

I must congratulate you for your profound understanding of what true success is. That at your age! I feel happy and proud to read your poem. Your lines rhyme and flow well. You are gifted, keep writing, Tanya.

success doesn't mean to get money, but to remain as sweet as sugar and honey. read this again and t feel good still

Beautiful poem Tanya. Success is what we feel good at heart. I loved reading each lines...

path breaking and blockbuster poetry.....! ! !

A nice poem Tanya. The rhyming is unusual in places, and there are a few spelling errors, but the sense of the poem isn't affected - I get the message.

What a lovely piece of writing and philosophy more people need to think like this before the worldis a kinder place. have you read the English poet John Clare and the American Robert frost? I think you will enjoy them both. Thankyou for your poem

Tanya, have you ever considered that success might just be the creation of a state of consciousness within which the true self, Soul, is in acceptance with all of life and is thus truly happy?

Oh! wonderful thought! bright defination of sucess. wish you all success.

this poem is a guidance to never give up it is the angel above all heaven to keep faith and hard work is everything when come to success

'success is the dream which comes true, when napping goes away from you.' That line right there is striking awesome! You are a great philosopher above all you are as a poet my dear Tanya!

Yes it did. Thanks for sharing. [3

This is one of your best poems tanya, frankly speaking this type of poem is not expected from girl of your age, kudos!

Very well written piece of writing.A true depiction of what success is! !

Success is a very relative matter....tanya......though you have composed it in your concept nonetheless better.....