Saturday, March 22, 2008

What Spring Brings Comments

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I enjoy what Spring brings.
The freshness of the air,
Supplied by the budding of leaves on trees.
A warming of a breeze that once could freeze.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Sandra Osborne 22 March 2008

Yes Lawrence. Excellent. Your rhyme was as fresh as a breath of spring and your words as hopeful as the newly fallen spring dew. Good to read your work again..10+

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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