Saturday, May 23, 2015

What Should I Write? Comments

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What should I write repeatedly I do think?
In deep thought of emotion I do sink.
Linking with mind I think about God,
Hymn I do write and soon I nod.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Pushpendra Patel 12 February 2019

This is the right time time to recognize self and right time to feel beauty of God. Nice poem you have shared dear sir.

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Mihaela Pirjol 03 December 2018

A wonderfully expressed Ars Poetica! May your Muse be always by your side, dear poet!

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Geetha Jayakumar 25 May 2015

Beautiful poem. Very true said in few lines... Hand of mine is full of fortune with vision, Future shines at the rate with new season. Reason of writing is unknown but I write, In God's path always walk in track right..... I sink in deep thought and finally reach to God. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading each lines..

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Akhtar Jawad 24 May 2015

Hand of mine is full of fortune with vision, Future shines at the rate with new season. Reason of writing is unknown but I write, In God's path always walk in track right. Shining thoughts...................10

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Valsa George 23 May 2015

A person who walks with God will definitely be happy! I feel that your mission in life, like Milton's is to glorify God and justify God's ways to man! I am sure He will be happy with your hymns! 'Writing poems of love I wash my pain'.is my favourite line!

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Uma Ram 23 May 2015

Wow beautiful sir. One more gem to your crown...Enjoy your writing sir. Thanks for sharing.

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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