Saturday, May 14, 2016

What Should I Say How Should I Say Whom Should I Say Comments

Rating: 5.0

Did I commit something wrong, what's that wrong?
He doesn't talk to me.
Any slip from my side, what's that slip,
I'm speaking to him, he doesn't listen to.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Edward Kofi Louis 02 October 2018

A pleasant evening. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Loke Kok Yee 16 May 2016

Little wonder you are among the best The what, how and whom; so well addressed thank you sir-10

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Kelly Kurt 14 May 2016

This is why you must keep writing poetry, Akhtar. You understand the human condition and put it into words that touch the soul. A perfect 10

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M Asim Nehal 14 May 2016

Nicely written in foreign language....I read your original poem too.

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