Friday, July 1, 2011

What She Needs To Hear. Comments

Rating: 5.0

She is your queen,
Something your eyes have never seen,
She is your heartbeat,
The size that you fit,
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Shamba Kaunda
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 July 2011

Excellent poem with a very strong structure. Great sentiments and incredible imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Regards Akmal

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