What Shall We Take? Comments

After death we cannot take anything in life. Even body we shall leave here. We should practice spiritual values in life which will go with us along with good resolves.

Bare hands we came, bare hand we aught go, This simple theme known well by all is still hard to put to practice, so well put in poetic wise words.

Smooth flow, rhythm, and rhymes in this poem on life, like the transiency of life itself.

A wonderful poem full of wisdom. A perceptive write well conveyed. Well penned.10+++

Going into another realm! But, let us take along the truth with us. Thanks for sharing.

picture of Irrational Rhymer xDeath is another state of consciousness, which we will find out once we transcend. Great write 4 Dec 2014 by Irrational Rhymer | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xThis is a very beautiful piece which totally immerses the reader 5 Dec 2014 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply Note: These review comments are received through PF.