What Shall I Write About? Comments

This is great, I really like it. It's sort of like a prose. Good job :)

I love this poem...I think what I am trying to do is just write, no rewriting, no revision, straight, and I'm trying to keep it simple, the obvious joys, joys at arms length not Romantic stuff: exotic dark gothic vampires, not the conservative Romantic stuff, but more like Shelley and Whitman. Thank you.