Thursday, September 10, 2009

What Shall I Tell You? Comments

Rating: 5.0

The day arrives with its pretty might,
Romps around like a pampered queen,
Taps running, women praying, children crying,
Land tilling, the light in my house filling
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Reshma Ramesh
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Pradyumna Jyotir 14 January 2010

The poem is vibrant... it is colorful...its lyrical....yet it has that little bit of melancholy in it. Best wishes Reshma.

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Chandrashekar A Posy Poet 17 September 2009

enough........so much! ! ! many images to ponder over...loved it reshma!

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Ying Escalona 17 September 2009

this is really really beautiful Resh, nice image, nice pictures, and to me, it seemed that i, too was in that sleepy eyes of yours, but let me tell you..... how i wished i was that delighted pup :)

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Sarwar Chowdhury 17 September 2009

Fine diction! copact touchy poetic beauty! 10+

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Anand Madhukar 17 September 2009

No words, only numbers left for me here. In fact, only one number really, and thats 10 of course.

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Sonya Florentino 16 September 2009

I echo Ramesh below...you've said a lot, and what a wonderful lot.... can you tell us some more? :)

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Ramesh T A 10 September 2009

You have said it all! If you anything more you can say it tomorrow! Good Night!

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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