Friday, July 19, 2019

What Separates These Two Fates? Comments

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Painful ‘tis attacking foes at gates,
Painful if friends leave, leave kindred mates,
Givers both of grave grief,
None rendering relief,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 July 2019

Wow, what a wonderful and perceptive write. To put this write in the form of limerick is just brilliant. Amazingly entertaining and thought provoking. Loved reading it.

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 July 2019

Thanks for the good words. The most difficult part of writing poems is good meaningful thoughts. Putting them well, well somehow is manageable. Here, much credit is deserved by the original Sanskrit verse. I appreciate what you say Rose Marie.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 July 2019

A brilliant limerick on foes and friends has been inscribed astutely with poet's note. Nice work.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 July 2019

That feels good, dear poet reader, thanks indeed.

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