Painful ‘tis attacking foes at gates,
Painful if friends leave, leave kindred mates,
Givers both of grave grief,
None rendering relief,
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A brilliant limerick on foes and friends has been inscribed astutely with poet's note. Nice work.10
Wow, what a wonderful and perceptive write. To put this write in the form of limerick is just brilliant. Amazingly entertaining and thought provoking. Loved reading it.
Thanks for the good words. The most difficult part of writing poems is good meaningful thoughts. Putting them well, well somehow is manageable. Here, much credit is deserved by the original Sanskrit verse. I appreciate what you say Rose Marie.