Thursday, December 27, 2012

What Say You My Heart So Tender Comments

Rating: 5.0

What say you my heart so tender
In the glow of eventide
When the world is calm and silent
And all tears fore'er subside
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Valerie Dohren
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Kevin Patrick 13 February 2013

This had my heart tugging, every line was pure magic, you are a modern Romantic with a fine hand for the written word thank you for sharing.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 09 January 2013

Have no doubt- your tender heart wil throb for long making you produce lovely refrains that enchant us. A FABULOUS POEM.

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Red O'mara 04 January 2013

You write beautifully, Val, no matter what the subject.

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Valsa George 03 January 2013

Let your heart not heed your prayer! Let it continue to throb for long to produce even greater melody! A WONDERFUL poem!

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Kelvin Owusu 01 January 2013

amazing poem, such beauty in this piece

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Tony Karas 30 December 2012

Wow! Totally awesome! So beautiful!

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Shahzia Batool 30 December 2012

A pure poetry it is! ! ! So imaginatively and tenderly composed...

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 30 December 2012

A very beautiful poem of idea and second and fourth line rhyming which adds the sweetness of the music.

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Be proud Valerie for you have got a heart so tender... I am worried often whether I have heart at all or why I have got a hard heart. A VERY VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR to VALERIE and all hear dear and near ones with tender hearts...

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Lyn Paul 29 December 2012

This is truly beautiful. Hope your heart is not tender

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Dave Walker 29 December 2012

A beautiful poem, when the heart stops beating the soul flies free.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 28 December 2012

A striking poem which touches the heart.!

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Scotty Dogg 27 December 2012

Incomparable poem. You know what you're doing. Loved it and going to read more.

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Dee Corpolongo 27 December 2012

A very thought filled wonder yet such a peaceful way to go...as we depart forevermore.... A beautifully constructed poem, with such soothing descriptions of comfort and peace. May we all be lucky enough to leave in such a peaceful way. Excellent, Val, as always, {{{ hugs}}} and a Happy New Year! ! !

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Neela Nath Das 27 December 2012

So dramatic and heart-touching as well. Great!

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Heather Wilson 27 December 2012

I pray your heart will continue beating for many years to come Val, a wonderful poem as always,

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Jahan Zeb 27 December 2012

First I would say this is a very musical and rhythmic piece. I loved the flow and the diction of the poem. You have used words with Some meanings. Then the theme of the poem is indeed a lovely one. You have constructed it will with comparison of the year or time passed or I should say passed and the time that is going to knock at our doors. A peaceful Write. Very well done

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