What say you my heart so tender
In the glow of eventide
When the world is calm and silent
And all tears fore'er subside
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Have no doubt- your tender heart wil throb for long making you produce lovely refrains that enchant us. A FABULOUS POEM.
Let your heart not heed your prayer! Let it continue to throb for long to produce even greater melody! A WONDERFUL poem!
A pure poetry it is! ! ! So imaginatively and tenderly composed...
A very beautiful poem of idea and second and fourth line rhyming which adds the sweetness of the music.
Be proud Valerie for you have got a heart so tender... I am worried often whether I have heart at all or why I have got a hard heart. A VERY VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR to VALERIE and all hear dear and near ones with tender hearts...
A beautiful poem, when the heart stops beating the soul flies free.
Incomparable poem. You know what you're doing. Loved it and going to read more.
A very thought filled wonder yet such a peaceful way to go...as we depart forevermore.... A beautifully constructed poem, with such soothing descriptions of comfort and peace. May we all be lucky enough to leave in such a peaceful way. Excellent, Val, as always, {{{ hugs}}} and a Happy New Year! ! !
I pray your heart will continue beating for many years to come Val, a wonderful poem as always,
First I would say this is a very musical and rhythmic piece. I loved the flow and the diction of the poem. You have used words with Some meanings. Then the theme of the poem is indeed a lovely one. You have constructed it will with comparison of the year or time passed or I should say passed and the time that is going to knock at our doors. A peaceful Write. Very well done
This had my heart tugging, every line was pure magic, you are a modern Romantic with a fine hand for the written word thank you for sharing.