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Know this as the sand shifts thru the hourglass of time
That we r great luminaries that outshine the sun, moon n stars combine
Our Glory is born with the total renewal of the Mind
By that eternal fire within, that carnal eyes can't find
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There is a recurring message in all your poems...man is but clay and mortal...there is a higher and better day for the redemption of man....if only man would give himself off and allow the higher powers to free him. You do well! Your poems should be out there.
True Aj...there's a brighter day after this this dark n cold night. Primitive Clay must stay awake till that blessed dawn when the light is born. Thanks for reading Abena. Thanks.
I say you are the poet everyone should be watching out for! I call this beautiful like the moon fading away to allow the sun to take over. This is on point! i like the the first line-Know this as the sand shifts through the hour glass of time...I like that it brings out the confidence with which you write and the certainty of the words put together in the subsequent lines. Five stars! ! !
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7/27/2025 5:53:44 PM # 1.0.0
Wonderful wonderful words, Courage! And with a purposeful flow like a river that knows where it is going. Read it twice... just for the pleasure of it!
Ur words are beautiful. Glad you made time to read through it, Terry. Thanks. Thanks.
Your words are beautiful. Glad you made time to read through it, Terry. Thanks. Thanks.