What's Your Dream? Comments

So nice. Gives me a new question about this life. What's your dream? I wish you will make a better poem

dreams and their various facets..well described through various sets of eyes

dreams has no borders, its like open space no end, no one can stop us to dream but we should work hard to make our dream become true

“What’s your dream? ” is life it self…we are all dreamers otherwise life wouldn’t be a reality in us. Your poem is a reminder for all of us, which we have to dream. However, we must as well realize that dreaming demands sweat and tears to achieve what we dream. And of course it is a lesson that all of us should learn, that not all we dream are for us, therefore we have to be mature enough to accept the limit- the reality that the things are meant for us are only those we can manage and be master of it. I like it…because I am as well a dreamer.

Your poem is well penned and tells a story of the different people in society, ending with the true dream of the average man. A very good write. a 10. Your friend Lynn

This poem is a realistical portrayal of the mature dreams with realistical solutions in our current existense.It is a poem about ideals and some ideas that relate to what we need for our future. A clear trajectory toward achieving concrete goals. Excellent poem as usual, Deependra, thank you for sharing.......10+++++++++++

This is such an interesting poem and very well composed. It tells a story all within the structure of poetry and it is skillfully done. The turn in the last stanza is wonderful with so much truth that relays a profound message. 10 love Karin

Deependra, what a lovely piece you wrote. it has so much meanings and depth and its so true. our wait for our wishes never end. thanks for sharing. take care

I echo Kesav's words, there is much truth in what you wrote, for happiness common man must find anther way. 10

truthful words...you give more than a message there...good work...10

such a meaningful poem....well done.....

A lovely and thoughts provoking poem, which is asking some serious questions?

And there lies the beauty of life, dear friend. A very well penned poem vovidly depicting the dreams of people from different professions. CP

Interesting look at how we are not who we are but what we are and how we express that. Human DOings instead of human BEings! ! Nice write.10

'He replied with despondence, I wish to collect my scattered dreams love, career, family, friend Days turned slowly into years but wait doesn't seem to end' Terrific ending. Great poem.

and if u ask me what's my dream? .. i wish a simple but smart respectfully honest kind and lovable naughty but sweet...your poem is nice and interesting...