Friday, May 9, 2008

What's The Problem Comments

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The problem is
I need a drink.
The problem is
my head.
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Rachel Slimm
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Howard Johnson 21 May 2008

I have to agree with blue bird, about 'are you ok 4real, A pleasure to read, Rachel

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Stone Granite 09 May 2008

I like the rhythm of this poem. Nicely done.

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~A Little Blue Bird~ 09 May 2008

Wow, that was a very good poem. The pace of it was perfect. I hope you are ok 4real.

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Rachel Slimm

Rachel Slimm

Hayle, Cornwall
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