What's That You Say? Comments

Lynn, Enjoyed your poem. I have added it to My Poem list. Rate a " 10"

hey, in the Poet's Notes you write 'two boys sitting', but in the poem it says standing. right? so which is it? sitting or standing? ? this is super important. i won't be able to eat supper until i know the answer. well, i'm being called to supper. maybe one bite? Alone within the universe of stars..........Alone? are you sure? There is no God .............a statement unproven, just as the statement There is God is unproven.....to me. ====================================== supper lasted longer than one bite. i lied. bri :)

Very nice poem. Well put. Welcome to PoemHunter. I will give you 10 points for it. You may appreciate my poem BIG BANG CREATION that had similar sentiments. I have a few more religious ones and many others.