What's mine?
Let me define.
Is it my looks?
But its God's fabrication.
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Its my patience, Mine and only mine. Its my modesty, Mine and only mine. Its my sacrifice, Mine and only mine. Its my honesty, Mine and only mine. Its my compassion, Mine and only mine. Its my humility, Mine and only mine. A great poem with universal messages.
God has bestowed His gifts as He has seen fit. We must walk true before Him for every man will give an account of himself to God. Thank you for contributing this thought provoking poem.
A thought provoking poem to ask self that what is mine exactly.? Nothing is permanent here and all are changing. Very thoughtful poem shared really.10
We are here for only a time to partake of each other and pull from each other in the most positive light. We build the soul and bring it to maturity, then we move on. We own nothing but our soul, all else is borrowed for a time, even our bodies. Well written Abdulrazak. Thank you very much
Our values are ours and our soul, I truly believe we never lose our soul, it goes with us into spirit. Excellent poem.....
A well penned poem that concerns the most basic valus that human beinga should possess... A nice read...
Russian saint traditions says: Mine - are only sins. all the good - belongs to God.
Lovely poem. God's gift are many. Some short term and transitory, some everlasting. All shine through in a defining moment of poetic imagery.
the search for the inner soul is long and often fruitless but yours is truly abundant. l
The very truth of life well conceived and expressed so explicitly........10/10
The recognition of the self and to realise one's own true nature is to reach God. Your powerful knowledge of the self and the goal of life is your greatest asset. May God bless you!
• Poet's Page What's mine? • • modesty, • Poems patience , sacrifice, • Comments honesty, humility, • Stats compassion, my dear Poet you talk about perennial values which lead a human being into the presence of the Almighty. loved your poem very much. i respect you more after reading this poem. thank you tony
A true relation between Master and servant, where servant is trying to understand what is his own..........A masterstroke indeed.
sir, you must add these two lines- It's my wisdom, Mine and only mine. because you must be a very wise person to write a thoughtful poem like this.
I do not have enough words to describe my enormous amdiration to your poems and lovely writings, i wish you all the best
Beautiful poem. Thoughts and actions are mine. I loved reading it.