Wednesday, April 1, 2015

What's Mine? Comments

Rating: 5.0

What's mine?
Let me define.
Is it my looks?
But its God's fabrication.
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti
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Geetha Jayakumar 01 August 2016

Beautiful poem. Thoughts and actions are mine. I loved reading it.

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Aabid Masroor 31 January 2016

Nice poem, thanks for sharing

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Akhtar Jawad 10 January 2016

Its my patience, Mine and only mine. Its my modesty, Mine and only mine. Its my sacrifice, Mine and only mine. Its my honesty, Mine and only mine. Its my compassion, Mine and only mine. Its my humility, Mine and only mine. A great poem with universal messages.

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Raymond Farrell 11 December 2015

God has bestowed His gifts as He has seen fit. We must walk true before Him for every man will give an account of himself to God. Thank you for contributing this thought provoking poem.

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Bakuli Bhakali 08 December 2015

well said and well written! thanks for sharing

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2015

A thought provoking poem to ask self that what is mine exactly.? Nothing is permanent here and all are changing. Very thoughtful poem shared really.10

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Maria Gonzalez 26 October 2015

We are here for only a time to partake of each other and pull from each other in the most positive light. We build the soul and bring it to maturity, then we move on. We own nothing but our soul, all else is borrowed for a time, even our bodies. Well written Abdulrazak. Thank you very much

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Free Bird 24 October 2015

It's my sacrifice Mine and only mine. Such a graet poem to read

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Melvina Germain 17 October 2015

Our values are ours and our soul, I truly believe we never lose our soul, it goes with us into spirit. Excellent poem.....

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Sallam Yassin 15 October 2015

Man's bread is baked in heart and you fed the brain/ thanks

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Souren Mondal 15 October 2015

A well penned poem that concerns the most basic valus that human beinga should possess... A nice read...

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Liza Sudina 13 October 2015

Russian saint traditions says: Mine - are only sins. all the good - belongs to God.

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Savita Tyagi 10 October 2015

Lovely poem. God's gift are many. Some short term and transitory, some everlasting. All shine through in a defining moment of poetic imagery.

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Andrew Blakemore 06 October 2015

the search for the inner soul is long and often fruitless but yours is truly abundant. l

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 05 October 2015

The very truth of life well conceived and expressed so explicitly........10/10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 October 2015

The recognition of the self and to realise one's own true nature is to reach God. Your powerful knowledge of the self and the goal of life is your greatest asset. May God bless you!

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 October 2015

• Poet's Page What's mine? • • modesty, • Poems patience , sacrifice, • Comments honesty, humility, • Stats compassion, my dear Poet you talk about perennial values which lead a human being into the presence of the Almighty. loved your poem very much. i respect you more after reading this poem. thank you tony

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M Asim Nehal 25 September 2015

A true relation between Master and servant, where servant is trying to understand what is his own..........A masterstroke indeed.

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Sanjukta Nag 06 September 2015

sir, you must add these two lines- It's my wisdom, Mine and only mine. because you must be a very wise person to write a thoughtful poem like this.

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Hadil Diaf 14 August 2015

I do not have enough words to describe my enormous amdiration to your poems and lovely writings, i wish you all the best

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