Thursday, December 27, 2012

What's It About? Comments

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It's all about Feeling,
Poetry
It's all about Caring,
You and me,
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Sandra Feldman
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Edward Kofi Louis 27 November 2016

It is all about life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bri Edwards 12 July 2014

is this Alfie speaking? did you intentionally leave no comma after Poetry? i like rhyming and i don't mind the repetition of -ing; they both lend cohesion to the poem, BUT i see no logical explanation for jumping to the statement: And yet, Finally, It's all about Nothing, . .............................it could even be depressing to some readers......some who are depressed enough already! yikes! ! ! thanks for sharing. :) bri

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