What's Inside My Soul Comments

I hope this isn't real but great description. The last four verses I would edit. Just cause you probably could improve the poem. Love the verse 'I can see the lights of the heavens' What contradicts the poem is it starts off as the poet being a strong person, a fighter against the odds then at the end it turned which is good but you could broaden this poem to be better by some more thought and edit.

oh scary! as long as this isnt how you exactly feel. i like the clear description of how you feel. i was waiting for the last two lines to rhyme cos its a sonnet you said.