Wednesday, August 30, 2017

What's In It For You Comments

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What has my tounge betrayed
All red wet and lubricious
Expecting the sharp smack
Of bitterness
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Dawn Novus
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Edward Kofi Louis 31 October 2017

Of bitterness! ! All the same, hope lies ahead. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 September 2017

Agreat write. Nice penmanship. I appreciate this poem. Thanks for sharing.

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