Forever and ever
The saying goes
But what's in eternity
Can it come close
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I've read 5 of your pieces, and I think I like this one the best so far. You are writing from your soul here, not just your heart. This is a very touching piece. Many poems allow us to stand outside and see what you see, but this one allows us to feel what you feel, to feel again what we have felt before. Well done! :)
More than there are stars To count in the sky.......i missed u... very nice exprssion of desire......... very good poem.
To be where you are! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Eternity and Love, beautifully expressed. A very touching poem, reaching deep.