Wednesday, July 27, 2016

What's In Eternity? Comments

Rating: 4.3

Forever and ever
The saying goes
But what's in eternity
Can it come close
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Julie Smith
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Sandra Feldman 01 October 2016

Eternity and Love, beautifully expressed. A very touching poem, reaching deep.

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Seamus O Brian 27 September 2016

I've read 5 of your pieces, and I think I like this one the best so far. You are writing from your soul here, not just your heart. This is a very touching piece. Many poems allow us to stand outside and see what you see, but this one allows us to feel what you feel, to feel again what we have felt before. Well done! :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 August 2016

More than there are stars To count in the sky.......i missed u... very nice exprssion of desire......... very good poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 July 2016

To be where you are! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Soul Watcher 27 July 2016

Wow, that's fantastic. I liked this poem, thanks for sharing

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Julie Smith 27 July 2016

Thanks a lot :)

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