Tuesday, June 15, 2010

What's In A Bird? Comments

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whay's in a bird,
that everybody wants to be
in their second life?
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shadow ... 18 June 2010

salamat po! (thank you -with courtesy!) such a relief to hear those comments from you. i havent read your work but ill look for it ASAP! sa uulitin! (until next time!)

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Lesly Dee 18 June 2010

Good poem, enjoyable read... Grammatical error, but i'm sure it was done while typing. I like the message, keep writing!

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 June 2010

that everybody wants to... fly away, run farther, and swim under just to leave everything behind? flying away from life................? ? ? liked ur comparison from bird to horse and then to fish.. thank you this is ur first poem and i am the first one to comment. God bless you

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