What's Hard Comments

Whitney: The theme of this poem is so insightful. You handle it well. And, believe me there are going to be hard things to take in every relationship your whole life through; even when one gets to be my age. Accepting that fact is what will carry you through. Adeline

You're quite motivational. I like the way you write. It's emotional, but you don't let things get you down. Good poem.

This is good! ! ! i like it very much.... good write.

Whitney...continue to put your heart on paper and I guarantee that you will be a great poet one day... not a good one... a GREAT one.... kind regards Alf

I love the second stanza, I feel your pain. WELL DONE! ! ! ! !

I liked this well thought out poem, you are a natural poet Whitney!

Beautiful! It reminds me of what my dad says, 'Everyone has a hard childhood.' So if a couple billion people can make it, I guess we can too. Lovely poem!

It's funny cause I've had to do all of those things besides being popular xD I knew that would have never happened LOL Great poem love very well done, and keep that in mms always ' you can make it through' <3

it takes only a moment to say hello....but it takes for ever to say goodbye......wonderful write.....yes life is difficult but that's what makes it worth while.....the more work that goes into something the more rewarding it will be......in the end its worth it.....you can do it! ...lol......very nice :)

Very positive thought. I like how you end this with the confident point. Assurance and confirmation that 'getting through' is possible! We all know how hard things are and sometimes it is easy to forget that we can overcome anything we put our minds to. At least give it one tough fight anyway! Not giving up is the key. Never give up and never give in. Believe in yourself and win. :) Deborah Cromer