Monday, March 16, 2009

What's Happening? Comments

Rating: 5.0

People dropp bombs on a crowd.
This world is really going down.
A boy in Germany,
shoots people and hates his family.
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James Pritchard
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Nangula Immanuel 02 June 2009

So true! What's happening is that everyone just cares about themselves and very few care about what happes to the person next to them. A very goo poem nonetheless. Strong message conveyed! !

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Serenity Prayer 16 March 2009

its very sad, but its true. good job.

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James Pritchard

James Pritchard

Bamberg, Germany
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