Wednesday, August 6, 2014

What's Gone Global. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everyone learns what's known as the Arabic numerals
like many learnt the Roman numerals
Anyone can:
Dine on delicious swiss rolls
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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Darlene Walsh 18 April 2015

A wonderful poem, the world is a small place and it is a shame there is so much trouble in it. One of my favorite foods is a Reuben. It's made with Irish corned beef, German sauerkraut, Russian dressing and Swiss cheese on Jewish Rye,5 nationalities in each bite.

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Khalida Bano Ali 03 November 2014

is indeed a mega jumbo global village So come one come all into the melting pot Very True,

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Darlene Walsh 04 September 2014

I love this poem. This great world we live in is a small place where each of us can reach out and effect so many others of our brothers and sister around the world.

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Kanav Justa 21 August 2014

... truly a wonderful message you left for each one of us.... not until..the whole world comes together as one... we can truly progress..

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 16 August 2014

the war boat is sailing on the blood of humanity...i wish hatred boat must have a hole at the bottom to sink, , , nice sharing Zaynub thank you write more more and more

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Ramesh Rai 16 August 2014

I appreciate your inclination towards culture etc. It is indeed good and i must like to say, 'KEEP IT UP'

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Ken E Hall 11 August 2014

Clever oh such a beauty ditty with a great message so sad the world is in such a religious turmoil and its the poet that can tell the tale...thanks for this

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Neela Nath Das 09 August 2014

We always get great message thru your write.From micro world you have taken us to a macro world of love and humanity.Let us melt our hatred and swim in the water of love.

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Lyn Paul 09 August 2014

Too bad the Australian Rules... Dockers lost by 3 points.... But sometimes we have to lose to win. Thanks for going Global.

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Lyn Paul 09 August 2014

Love it. You have covered so much even having Australian Rules footy which I am watching now.5 minutes left and 5 points down. And yes it is a small world after all. Thank you for such an interesting write.

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 August 2014

poetry at its best.amazing style and flow.loved it.

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 August 2014

Superb write. You have melted everything in a wonderful pot and great pudding you have made of it., were all are going to enjoy this delight in Global Village....Really if such village exists in our planet, I just wonder. Really your pudding gives the taste and fragrance of love and humanity. Awesome! ! ! ! ! Loved it.

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Valsa George 07 August 2014

We delight in the specialities of each country but hardly share a common brotherhood! The last line is beautiful! When the geographical distance between countries and continents are bridged through globalisation, there is greater distancing between man and man! This is so sad! What a wonderful world it would have been, if we all could live here on this Earth as members of a big joint family! The universal message of love and humanity is brought out in an immaculate way!

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Young Church Poetry 07 August 2014

Hold on to Basotho peace.........Wow I like your poem very much, its very intereting I give it 10/10.

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Gajanan Mishra 07 August 2014

globular ball, thanks, good writing.

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Dave Walker 07 August 2014

A great poem, the world has many things to enjoy, if all wars stopped what a world it would be.

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Daniel Brick 06 August 2014

I call this kind of poem a List Poem and it's brilliant. Just like a SF writer spinning a futurist tale, you take present trends to their logical conclusions. And it's all eminently plausible. I like the names you gave to the commercially-designed, buy-and-sell world we occupy (or are occupied by) , namely, MEGA JUMBO GLOBAL VILLAGE and MERELY A MASSIVE HALL. That's it - That's where I - we - live, like it or not.

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Ayesha Tul Kubra 06 August 2014

Its beautiful. A blow to the racism and your style of writing absorbs one completely in the poem.

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