What's For Lunch? Comments

You did it again! I am a fan for life, Roger.

great narrative and a emotive theme. the four line stanza's work very well. The switching from the two extremes. the western prespective and the starving casuallty works very well. At first i felt the poem was to long but after reading it a few times i see the importance of the lengh and slow pacing of the poem. strong work. best wishes Vincent