Saturday, September 10, 2016

What's A Good Day For Bri? ... [inspired By Lora Colon's ' A Good Day '; Sweets And Fats; Feeling Good; Humor? ; Fantasy] Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's a good day, though YOU might cry,
when MY belly's full of pumpkin pie.
And donuts may cause an early demise,
but they never fail to brighten my eyes.
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Madathil Rajendran Nair 13 September 2016

This is such racy, witty, hearty write! Thanks for sharing.

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Annette Aitken 12 September 2016

Loving this one..though I'm the only chocoholic diabetic I know..even reading this is bad for me heheheheh...

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Valsa George 12 September 2016

This is a wonderful write Bri.... No wonder when you write about your only preoccupation in life, you are at your creative best!

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Savita Tyagi 11 September 2016

Thanks Bri for this light hearted fun poem.

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Savita Tyagi 11 September 2016

Hahaha! Any day is a good day if I can eat! Fried samosa and Pakori I will take but bypass some frosting laced cake.

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Bharati Nayak 10 September 2016

A slimming diet! ! Nice one.Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 10 September 2016

I am with you on fried foods, but I would much rather have a main course of meat followed by meat for dessert. Equally as unhealthy: -)

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