Friday, October 5, 2012

What Races, Horse Races? Comments

Rating: 3.3

I see the different races,
But I don't really care,
The color of the skin,
Not really my affair.
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Sandra Feldman
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Edward Kofi Louis 12 August 2016

Yes! Like the two sides of the coin. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bri Edwards 30 November 2013

i was surprised by the subject matter; the title fooled me. i liked it much better when you were rhyming. AND i believe it is not as simple as the Good and the Bad. i beleive there are many shades of goodness and badness. but, okay, you made your point. which books are those? the last two lines seem to belong to a different poem. were you just reaching TOO far for a rhyme? but, thanks for sharing. :)

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