Friday, August 1, 2008

What Price Literacy? Comments

Rating: 4.9

An extraordinary time you have waited
Quiet, in no kind of rush
You must be pleased now that it's over
Your time in the African bush
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Martin O'Neill
COMMENTS
Rajnish Manga 14 December 2014

Congratulations, Martin, your poem is Today's Special. The poem is impressive mainly because of its emotional content and appeal. Thanks for your notes about the poem.

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Kim Barney 14 December 2014

Fabulous poem, Martin. Also, congratulations for having it chosen as poem of the day on December 14 for three years in a row now!

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 14 December 2014

A thought provoking poem and it is nice.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 14 December 2014

A thought provoking poem and it is nice.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 14 December 2014

Treasure is its simple and lucid expression. The poem penetrate direst to the reader's heart. Small but unique. Thanks for sharing.

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Geetha Jayakumar 14 December 2013

Powerful and thought provoking poem. The last line is really sad. Thank you.

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Douglas Scotney 14 December 2013

spinechilling, martin

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Ruth Walters 16 December 2012

Totally well done Martin! Brilliant......Ruthie

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Tony Karas 14 December 2012

Totally moving.... left me speechless for a bit.

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Valerie Dohren 14 December 2012

A legacy of war, more than sad, dreadful beyond words. Very well written.

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Lyn Paul 14 December 2012

Yes sad ending, but the poem is really beautiful.

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Gajanan Mishra 14 December 2012

An extra ordinary time you have awaited. good start. thanks.

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Kelvin Owusu 14 December 2012

didn't really understand this piece but it is a good read nicely written

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 18 June 2012

I do not get the poem...it sounds good and deep...but i cnt still grasp it...pls inbox me with the clue

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Sue S. 08 April 2012

I gasped out loud in horror at the last line. I didn't see that coming - but then I guess that was the point. An excellent poem.

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Wahab Abdul 19 March 2012

A BRILLIANT PIECE OF POETRY, GOOD MEANING AND HEAVY IMPACT ON THE MIND.

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John Raubenheimer 11 February 2012

Yes a great poem. A powerful, a shocking poem. I believe I've read this before.

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Elena Sandu 07 February 2012

One of the most painful peace manifests I have ever read. You surely know how to manipulate a soul needs, rivers of tears are not enough to wash the sadness brought by dormant mines, what is the use of literacy if we cannot protect the child? Thank you.

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Gone Away 16 March 2010

A fine poem with a big impact.

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Fay Slimm 06 January 2009

An end line never to be forgotten Martin - - -- - yes at what price literacy... a fine appeal written forcefully....... thank you....... Fay.

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