Instant pain or pleasure,
Fiery arrows
That you treasure,
Longing to be free,
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If only all poems could be as you say, they would build and nourish all through the day.
Passionate spree, Reaching out Trying to discover, Immortality, That's how poems have to be, ...only love can set u free.... just fine and wonderful message. all poets should read your view.. tony
Passionate spree reaches in free mind to motivate many to write and read poetry. Pain or pleasure it does not matter. Poetry removes pain and gives joy to many. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned with love and freedom. This is excellent sharing done here...10
Nicely written about what poems should be! I especially like the ending. Love can and WILL set you free!