What Our Love Is.... Comments

a love ballad written recently with my friend from usa its sweet and melodious effect sooths mind

great thoughts, lines. words..intensely beauteous...10 If words were spoken. I would not need that token. When I look into a darkened velvet sky, they seem to sparkle like your eyes. ! ! ! : :

loved everything...creatively fantatstic! If words were spoken. I would not need that token. When I look into a darkened velvet sky, they seem to sparkle like your eyes. ! ! ! : :

Your words are spellbinding they are your creative beauty of a heart that beats with passion, love and truth and your pen captures your emotions with awesome lines!

Love makes man reasonable mature and likee good people love hs tremandous force to realizeand enjoy the source

Thrilling expression. A beautiful poem on love so nicely envisioned and aptly depicted with metaphor. The favourite lines are.........our love is something that needs no description at night when I talk to the moon, find him jealous your eyes have the beauty of the whole world inside your arms i get what people call heaven... Thank you dear Vishal, may God increase your poetic thoughts......10

my eyes never sleep inside your dreams The expression of love in the poem is incredible. Not sensuous but aesthetic to the core. Thanks. I quote: inside your arms i get what people call heaven... / Words on my neck / Your breath and mine / We shine / We are one.