Thursday, September 10, 2015

What Once Was Comments

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He was my window to Springtime,
His love, like a soft wind, kept me warm,
His kiss delivered the sun's promise
To chase away the bitter storm
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Lora Colon
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Kassem Oude 11 September 2015

He Was He was the garden of my soul I sensed life odors, fresh fruits I toiled in and had full my pail Rot the roots yet die the shoots

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Amitava Sur 11 September 2015

So heart touching poem it was.A beautiful expression of close bonding with beloved.I personally believe that this loss can never be fulfilled in this life by any other means.Though its very harsh to hear, but this pain of losing the dear will remain intact throughout rest of life. I'm sorry to say the harsh fact.

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David Wood 10 September 2015

He was everything my heart needs. Really lovely words. Time heals all broken hearts so that life can start anew. Lovely poem.

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