Tuesday, November 18, 2008

What Of Passion? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Passion and judgement often wage war, bold
Reason tho', speaks to make peace, and awards
Both rudder and sail to unseasoned souls,
Who, broken by passion unchained, broaden
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Robert Howard 18 December 2008

The final three lines of the first stanza are a great summation of the forces set in motion during the preceding lines. The poem as a whole has a fine balance to it that reads very well.

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Tom Balch 23 November 2008

Chris is right Fay, where would we be? 10 from Tom

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Kris Smith 18 November 2008

Where would we be without it in our lives great piece of poetry Fay ageless with passion you are Chris 10 Chris

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 18 November 2008

Life is all about passion, no matter the age... andrew 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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