Friday, December 28, 2007

What My Vision Fortold Comments

Rating: 4.3

twas it night, or day
i could not tell
this time,
my visions did fortell
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peter doane
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Peter Doane 06 January 2008

sry about the spelling thing im only 14 so

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John Anderson 31 December 2007

Enjoyed this. Good rhythm, reader gets into your brain, but the misspellings are distracting and force me to figure out for a split second what word you're looking for.

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