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Dreams unfulfilled
Goals unreached
Success slipping through
fingers outstretched
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Nice the way you start out with general things and then slowly zero in on the particulars coming to a satisfactory ending. The last sentence is truly a resting place - no desire to say anyting else or go beyond that.
very tidy writen, better simple but perfect work, thats made you a great poet, keep up the good work.
Such poetry instills the value of home, dreams for secular satisfaction will only numb the emotional concern and moral values of a family.10 again.
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7/18/2025 5:05:14 PM # 1.0.0
A truly spiritual poem. Great title, metaphor and philosophy. Wonderful.