Monday, August 2, 2021

What Man Vitiated Comments

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What man vitiated
Only he can rebuild.
It is his power to dream
That has built this world
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Alyx True Edge 24 September 2024

Yes, there is a social worker dreaming of ending homelessness, building shelters and there is the multinational CEO dreaming of a giga factory in the desert. Dreams are a wonderful capacity but actions are tied to the maturity of desires expressed. I love the hopeful quality of them in the poem 5/5

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 March 2022

It's a precious poem with a great message dear poet...liked it.5 stars.

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 March 2022

Nice observation, Sir. Thank you.

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 August 2021

My gratitude to Chinedu, Varsha and Asim for reading the poem and sharing your observations. Deeply obliged. Thanks again

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Chinedu Dike 03 August 2021

Great lines nicely put together. A masterful creation....

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M Asim Nehal 03 August 2021

Awesome! ! ! ! ! Yes a dream leads to all inventions.5*****

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Varsha M 03 August 2021

Yes sir. Its the dream of a man ehich made him what he is today out of cave man. Well said.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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