Thursday, November 12, 2015

What Man Is This Comments

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Twas a night of bleeding hell,
when soldiers stood their ground.
They headed him with deadly thorns,
and mocked it as his crown.
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Melvina Germain
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M Asim Nehal 13 November 2015

Superb, I liked the last stanza although all stanza' r beautifully written. Nailed to the cross, a gruesome sight to see. Like daggers were his words, who spoke of you and me. Forgive them Lord for they know not what they do. He asked forgiveness for all who wished him dead. In days to come, he'll rise again and soon his flock be led

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