Wednesday, March 18, 2009

*what Makes You Cry? Comments

Rating: 3.0

What makes you cry?
I pray it’s not always me
As you have convinced me many times
The real me
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Ted Sheridan
COMMENTS
Shams Tahir 07 May 2009

you are the people who are teasing and hurting the world then why do you say i not?

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Hye Heon Seo 22 April 2009

Beautiful....... just like my teacher's style>_<

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a beautiful poem for some one even if she cry because of you, it is a good sighn that she loves you

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Mae Summerville 02 April 2009

i loved this poem...ive often wondered the same...what makes him cry when im not to blame...or..whos to blame when il not...thanks

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 29 March 2009

' I encounter in the deafening mist of empty dreams ' What a beautiful line, Ted. The whole poem is uplifted by this line........A definite 10.

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Travis Lepine 29 March 2009

I enjoyed this poem; it was extremely emotional. You're a great poet. Thank you for sharing your work.10.

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Just the frustrations of existing fruitlessly can make anyone cry especially when desires are unfullfilled.Hope you are feeling better.

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Atul Sharma 27 March 2009

Well! A really emotional poem it is! You're a great poet.

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James Nall 23 March 2009

great write my friend gotta give you a 10!

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Akram Saqib 20 March 2009

LOCKED CLOSET ARE NOT TO ABANDON LOVE BEHIND BUT TO ACCOMPANY LOVE.GREAT WRITE WITH LOGIC. SAQIB

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