Tuesday, November 13, 2012

What Makes Bri Feel Bad....[personal] Comments

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I don't mean (by 'feel bad') unruly, criminal, or mean. I mean disgusted or disappointed, or somewhere in between.

It bothers me to see a person littering, but I still get through the day. If I think someone is wheeling a store's cart home, I really want to say:
'Did the manager give you permission? '.... It seems like stealing in a way.
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 18 November 2012

This is a prose/poem and Ogden Nash wrote a lot of these - the style is free and spontaneous with some rhyme perhaps (but not always) but the content is its best ingredient. I enjoyed reading it, it's natural and candid, matter-of-fact approach makes the reading easy and delightful. 10++++

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Bri Edwards 13 November 2012

when i submitted this poem a few minutes ago it looked more like a poem to me. now, as i am previewing it, after successfully submitting it, i SEE it looks more like prose to me, BUT i like the look. isn't it funny what computers can decide to do on their own? ? bri edwards

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