Thursday, July 6, 2017

What Magic Is Comprised Of? Comments

Rating: 4.7

When sweet melodies no longer echo in the air,
and their lyrics have distorted meanings;

When I can no longer hear your voice,
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Captain Cur 06 July 2017

Powerful ending. Great poem!

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Rajnish Manga 06 July 2017

When sweet melodies no longer echo in the air, When the days hang as beads upon a thread: We wear them as chains around our necks; — //.... Masochistic pleasure does not bide well for a flourishing love affair. Thanks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2017

A masochistic pleasure of a love is very very complex to understand. Love brings emotion when sweet melodies no longer echo in the air. Sometimes this provokes thought. Time on faces sets indifference and this amazes more. Memories of love are worn as chain on and around neck. Very pleasing, nice and interesting poem is shared here is very beautiful really....10

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